Medicine, patients, therapy!
This is the story of my life,
Everyday and soon enough my career!
Rudeness, attitudes, pain!
Dealing with the elderly and youngsters, makes the time go by each and everyday!
Even with all these negative things I deal with, in the end it's what makes my life full of excitement!
Hey there,
ReplyDeleteI think the poem that you have written is very creative and matches to the imitation of Frank O'Hara's style. when you started off with the first line with the three words, it pretty mush said what the poem is about and then as you elaborated more in the next few lines made it very simple and to the point that it's a story about the profession. You've given a well description as well as emotions to the poem. There are nice usages of conveying emotions like "story of my life" and then "in the end it's what makes my life full of excitement." It's a nice and simple poem which I enjoyed reading. Well done, Debbie